The Official Writing Challenge
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A great choice for the topic, and nicely done.
03/14/15
Lovely!

God bless~
This is definitely on topic. I like the way you inserted the short lines about Zacchaeus between the stanzas. You retold the message well in poetry.
03/16/15
Very creative use of the Zacchaeus story. Your poem had a lyrical flow that made it a joy to read.
03/16/15
Very economical language, with creative pauses to help us gather our thoughts - and gauge Zacchaeus' thoughts before you take us onto the next step for him.
Very well done.
I'll remember this version of the well-known story. Definitely on topic and out of the box. I loved the feeling of being taken on Zacchaeus's journey of transformation.
03/18/15
Very well done. I enjoyed this immensely. You have a definite gift for poetry, and the rhythm and rhyme were excellent. Great retelling of the story.
03/19/15
Congratulations!

God bless~
03/19/15
HC, EC. It's EC 2C Y. Congratulations.
This is just great. A wonderful way of telling the Zacceus story. I love your last verse. Many congrats Ellen on a very well deserved EC.
A truly lovely poem depicting hope in Jesus. Congratulations.