The Official Writing Challenge
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01/29/15
Amen. Excellent message and writing.

God bless~
02/01/15
Very deep and challenging. It's good to see that even stuck in the deepest pits of despair that God is able to comfort and rescue us.
02/01/15
Captivating read! Story so well told—light cut through the darkness physically and spiritually! Well done!
This is a captivating story of greed, remorse, forgiveness, and renewal. The details of the setting make the story real.
02/03/15
Graphic portrayal of your MC's internal and external journey, wrapping up with a positive message. Well done - in spite of the migraine.
02/04/15
very good entry! You had my mind wondering at possibilities; Who knew he needed saving?

I felt strong parallel between the pit greed found his body in and the pit that held his soul.

Great job!
02/08/15
Fantastic contrasts of the before-and-after that moment of realization. (My Great grandfather was a coal-miner). Those moments where your MC was trapped are haunting. Super work on this story. Congrats on your Editor's Choice.