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Amen. Excellent message and writing.

God bless~
Very deep and challenging. It's good to see that even stuck in the deepest pits of despair that God is able to comfort and rescue us.
Captivating read! Story so well toldlight cut through the darkness physically and spiritually! Well done!
This is a captivating story of greed, remorse, forgiveness, and renewal. The details of the setting make the story real.
Graphic portrayal of your MC's internal and external journey, wrapping up with a positive message. Well done - in spite of the migraine.
very good entry! You had my mind wondering at possibilities; Who knew he needed saving?

I felt strong parallel between the pit greed found his body in and the pit that held his soul.

Great job!
Fantastic contrasts of the before-and-after that moment of realization. (My Great grandfather was a coal-miner). Those moments where your MC was trapped are haunting. Super work on this story. Congrats on your Editor's Choice.