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01/25/15
Interesting way of concluding the story. Well done.

God bless~
01/27/15
You've poured a lot of emotion in this story. I didn't see that ending coming, but I liked it (and the message contained within). You left this reader with a lot to consider.
01/29/15
Your last line says it all and is the root of many addictions. Also liked the message to pray with and for people, not mock them. Well done.
01/29/15
Congrats!

God bless~
Thank you everyone for your comments. You help me so much to tighten up my writing. I appreciate you all!
01/31/15
Exactly. She was definitely hungry for much more than food. Oh how we hurt each other and still I am not sure how to react other than to pray. I am so glad that you chose that way to end your story, I was getting ready to hear the waitress say, "I paid for your bill" as though it would help. I hope the waitress prayed before she prayed... Thanks for a good insight as to how one might feel in that kind of situation.