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Interesting way of concluding the story. Well done.

God bless~
You've poured a lot of emotion in this story. I didn't see that ending coming, but I liked it (and the message contained within). You left this reader with a lot to consider.
Your last line says it all and is the root of many addictions. Also liked the message to pray with and for people, not mock them. Well done.

God bless~
Thank you everyone for your comments. You help me so much to tighten up my writing. I appreciate you all!
Exactly. She was definitely hungry for much more than food. Oh how we hurt each other and still I am not sure how to react other than to pray. I am so glad that you chose that way to end your story, I was getting ready to hear the waitress say, "I paid for your bill" as though it would help. I hope the waitress prayed before she prayed... Thanks for a good insight as to how one might feel in that kind of situation.