The Official Writing Challenge
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01/19/15
Nice warm story of what really matters in life.
Well written, thanks I enjoyed it.

God bless~
01/21/15
Creative twist at the end - and definitely a reminder of what matters.

I was a bit thrown as the attitude of the POV character changed - not sure that was as smooth as it could have been - but I'm not really sure how else you could have done it.

Nicely done.
01/22/15
Congrats Leola!
God bless~