The Official Writing Challenge
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11/15/14
This is a delightful story of your family's Sunday drives and brings the simple pleasures you enjoyed to life really well.
11/15/14
Awww! A sweet and nostalgic read...I remember Sunday drives with my family, quite similar!

Thanks for sharing.

God bless~
Wonderful account using your childhood voice and memories. I liked the twist on "Far East" and was impressed with the way you forced me to rethink about what exotic might be.
11/20/14
Congratulations!

God bless~
11/20/14
Congratulations, Francy on your 2nd place win. So well deserved!
11/20/14
Thanks for sharing this sweet look into your Sunday outings.
Congratulations on your 2nd place win.
11/20/14
Congratulations on giving us such full-blown sensory experience. You've augmented the maxim of "show don't tell" so completely that I've been hearing, smelling and tasting as well. A well-deserved placing. Great work.
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your descriptions and personal touches very much.
Congrats Francy!