The Official Writing Challenge
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11/15/14
You have painted a lovely word picture of Civita which kept me reading. I enjoyed it. Well done.
Your travelogue was very well done. I enjoyed it all, but my favorite descriptions were in your paragraph about returning to Civita.
11/15/14
Brilliant. I could feel the bittersweetness, the wistfulness, as well as the sunshine, in this piece. Beautiful work.
11/15/14
Beautiful and wistful!

God bless~
Amazing piece, very thought-provoking. And very relevant, too ; many more cities/towns could be damaged or lost due to erosion in the future.
11/17/14
Your descriptions were so fascinating I had to goggle the Civita.

It looks as captivating as you described.
11/20/14
Congratulations!

God bless~
11/20/14
Congratulations, Milly, on your EC. As I said before, I enjoyed this very much.
11/21/14
Congratulations, Milly!
11/21/14
You've drawn us into the timeless nature of relentless decay, and of oral history. Beautiful word-pictures that capture the mood as well as the setting. Great work, and congrats on your EC placing.
Congratulations on your placing. You made me wan to visit that lovely place.