The Official Writing Challenge
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You made me homesick for a place I've never seen - but one day I'd like to. Very evocative writing.
I totally agree with Noel. How about the three of us meet at the ice cream parlor. Then, you can take us on a walking tour to eat up the calories and enjoy those wonderful sites! It sounds lovely and exciting--and deliciously endued with tasty sustenance places for every pallet. Great job!
You make me want to move to Brooklyn! I visited there when I was a teenager and fell in love.

This is a delightful, beautifully written travelogue, with perfect descriptions of a place I would love to go to right now. New York at it's finest.

Thanks for the wonderful trip. This smells winner to me.

Blessings, Lynn


This one slipped by me, and I am sorry that I did not read it prior to Judgment Day.

I have never been to NYC other than JFK Airport 3 times.

One day if the Lord lets me go there, I will remember this article and take it with me.

I will make 110% that I read your article on adventure.

I love reading your articles, and always come away in a better state of Christian mind.

I would not be surprised when we get to Heaven, that God chose you to be his official writer!

God Bless!!

You wrote a stunning invitation to a place I had never considered inviting!

Had to google map, it which made it even more alluring.

I would thoroughly enjoy white cheese on grilled pumpernickel and a stroll through this historic burg with you.

I have been to NYC as a tourist and was in awe of many things, but how wonderful it would be to visit with you as tour guide. Very interesting read.