The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh I could see this in the movies with the audience screaming, especially with the "note" he left behind!

Well done!

God bless~
Wow! That's scary! Well done.
I like the open ending.
Scarey stuff here. Your approach of letting the reader relax a little with the visitor made the ending even more intense. Great job.
VERY suspenseful and a great, creepy open ending. I liked this.
If that were me, I'd be checking out of there at my earliest opportunity! That was very effective. Thank you for sharing.
A great story! What a scary ending! You've told it really well and left us wondering. Well done.
Creepy, and leaves all sorts of scary endings to the imagination. Very well done.
Unforgettably chilling!

Hugs, Judi
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