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10/31/14
Oh I could see this in the movies with the audience screaming, especially with the "note" he left behind!

Well done!

God bless~
Wow! That's scary! Well done.
I like the open ending.
11/01/14
Scarey stuff here. Your approach of letting the reader relax a little with the visitor made the ending even more intense. Great job.
VERY suspenseful and a great, creepy open ending. I liked this.
If that were me, I'd be checking out of there at my earliest opportunity! That was very effective. Thank you for sharing.
11/01/14
A great story! What a scary ending! You've told it really well and left us wondering. Well done.
11/02/14
Creepy, and leaves all sorts of scary endings to the imagination. Very well done.
Unforgettably chilling!

Hugs, Judi
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