The Official Writing Challenge
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I'm so glad the mouse escaped! Great job with this, "cat and mouse" tale.

I loved it, and the ending!

God bless~
Your vivid descriptions kept the suspense going right to the ending. Great job!
I loved this take on the topic, I thought it was really clever and original. The descriptions were so beautifully done, you could imagine the scene. I'm glad the mouse got away!
Great build up to the final escape, which I'm sure your MC (Mouse Character) bragged about musically later on as just another case of "Mice and easy does it." A A brilliant, though quite deliberately mouse-leading tail.
Loved it all the way through.
Well written and certainly suspenseful--until the surprise ending, anyway! I enjoyed this.
Chilled, thrilled and I am putty in your words - excellent!
Hugs, Judi
1 Timothy 3:16 KJV

God bless~
Great descriptions through out the story.
Such a creative take on the topic! I had no clue that was where it was going until close to the end. Then I went back and read it again to savor from that low-to-the-ground perspective. Enjoyed this! Congratulations!