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Imaginative and engrossing story. Good job, I liked how you pulled the ending off.

God bless~
Good mix of science and possibility and the faith to beleave in more.
Sending shivers . . .
Loving you in and through and because of the Christ, Judi
1 Timothy 3:16 KJV
Interesting idea and thought-provoking. Thank you for sharing.
Faith --essential to our survival -- yes! Your excellent story did a good job of showing that.
God bless~
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed this so much.
Oooh, Melanie, I really like this. You held my attention the entire way through; Beast666, what a fascinating substance, and oh boy, could it be used for nefarious means! My favourite section was the ending; faith and religion really don't have a genetic basis, so no matter what may come, our relationship with Christ cannot be altered or removed! The final line, about the silver cross that noone knew about; gave me goosebumps.

Melanie, I have been sold; if I read this as an excerpt I would most certainly want to read the book. Well done indeed, and congrats on your 2nd placing. Blessings, Helen.