The Official Writing Challenge
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10/24/14
Very vivid in description and detail. Interesting entry.

God bless~
"If Reece lived longer than Methuselah, he would never forget what happened next."

So creative. I enjoyed reading your entry. Keep writing!
10/27/14
You have some wonderful descriptive phrases in this imaginative tale. I could "hear" the grave-yard quiet. I enjoyed this!
Love your descriptions . . .
Loving you in and through and because of the Christ, Judi
1 Timothy 3:16 KJV
10/28/14
Wow, this is top writing: its pictures, its energy and its descriptive atmosphere. You should rate well.
I was with you every minute in this wild adventure. Well done!
I agree with everyone about the vivid descriptions. Thank you for sharing.