The Official Writing Challenge
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10/10/14
You did an excellent job of focusing on the car trip and the trip down a rough memory lane; the symbolism of the twin towers not lost on this reader. This was poignant and tender. Loved it.
10/13/14
Beautiful, touching, poignant and moving. Thank you for sharing this tender and emotional story.

God bless~
Very moving story, but also uplifting in describing how families, all dealing with their own tragedies, comfort and support each other. Thank you for sharing.
10/14/14
I don't think you're out of shape in your writing after being away. Really good job!
This was interesting from beginning to end--your pilgrimage to remember and to bring hope to others. Good writing.
Congratulations on your placing. A beautifully written and moving. story
Congratulations :)
10/17/14
Thank you for sharing your faith and hope here with us, and for ministering to others. Congratulations! ( I know how insufficient mere words are, but they still unite hearts.)
10/17/14
Congratulations!

God bless~
10/18/14
Congratulations on your EC placing! Thanks for sharing this moving story of your own family and sharing it so well.