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10/10/14
What a delightful read! You pulled my emotions all over the place in this gripping tale. By the last pink slip, I groaned out loud, anticipating the worst, of course. You've done a fantastic job of storytelling. I applaud your work, and thank the Lord for the story's ending as it did. Thanks so much for sharing.
10/10/14
What a delightful read! You pulled my emotions all over the place in this gripping tale. By the last pink slip, I groaned out loud, anticipating the worst, of course. You've done a fantastic job of storytelling. I applaud your work, and thank the Lord for the story's ending as it did. Thanks so much for sharing.
10/13/14
Excellent! I loved how you told your story...with each pink slip I was squirming myself.

Congratulations in advance for this amazing read, which just happens to be true!

Thanks for sharing.

God bless~
10/13/14
Maybe you should have worn a pink slip. I loved the ironic twists you've taken us through - leading to a terrific close. Well done.
Congratulations on ranking 13th overall!