The Official Writing Challenge
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Awww. This touched my heart.
Beautifully written.

God bless~
So sad and beautiful. Great imagery. A tough subject to write and you've done it in a tender way. I really enjoyed this piece.
Wow! Francy, this was so moving. Beautifully written. I love it. Congratulations and God bless.
I love the way you kept us guessing about just what the problem with your MC was. I never expected the emotional ending. Great writing. Congratulations!
Congratulations on your EC placement for an excellent story. I love how you let the reader read between the lines.
This story nailed the topic and certainly stirred the heart of this reader. Congrats on your well deserved EC placement.
Exquisite - and understandable. You held my interest wonderfully, Francy . . .

What a wonderful, heart-tugging story. It flows so well and completely drew me in. Well done.
A very realistic look into the mind of a suffering soul.
Your story skills are so impressive! What a creative mind you have. Great tension in this piece and insight into the mind of a suffering mom. Congrats on your EC award for this one. Deserved!