The Official Writing Challenge
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I love this . . . it is, unfortunately, too true-to-life!
05/18/14
I'm sure we've all heard or been a part of gossip disguised as prayer, or other good works. But no matter how we try to dress it up, it's still just gossip.

I really liked your work in this piece and the message you presented to us.

Great job!
This is excellent. A very clever poem that not only nails the subject right on the head but sadly has a truthful ring. Great writing.
05/19/14
GOod job with the topic through poetry. Nicely done.

God bless~
05/19/14
The only offensive part of this is that it is true, and the Truth is offensive for those it hits.

A well written piece of poetic satire.

Blessings.
05/19/14
As others have said, this is, unfortunately, too true sometimes. You did a great job of combining a bit of humor with that "ouch" factor, and making it serious at the same time.