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Thanks for taking us through your (or your MC's) Christmas day so movingly and beautifully. You tell of the emotional ups and downs so well. Well done.
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Thank you for this reflective piece that can easily relate to anyone of us. Beautifully written and expressed.

God bless~
A heartfelt, yet warming story of someone journeying through the grieving process. Christmas is always a heartache when a loved one is missing. Your MC was beautifully portrayed. I wondered if it's a true account although you didn't say it was.
Oh Grief - the leveller of all - poignantly done - thanks
What a powerful and well told story, vivid with the heart touching emotions of a woman dealing with a very difficult day—a first Christmas without her husband! This so well portrayed the mix of sadness and blessings that flooded her day! Great job on this!
Somehow God fills the gaps left by those we love in life and lose to death. Well told story.
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