The Official Writing Challenge
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That was exquisite. Thank you!
Hauntingly beautiful!

God bless~
I enjoyed your take, thank for sharing this.
A very positive rebuke to the self-absorption that can addict us to placing selfish expectations on God that he does not need to fulfil. Well done.
Marvelous entry. It's true, He didn't have to... but He desperately WANTED to!
You crafted a lovingly composed reminder to all of us, how gracious and merciful He is.
Thank you.
I am not comfortable commenting on poems, but I like to get reviews. So, I think your entry is full of truth. It is presented in a touching way, not preachy. I liked it.

Loved this. The only red ink I can apply is that YOU wrote it and I didn't!
Glory to God! This is why and how we should praise Him. [
Congrats! God Bless~
I knew this was special!

Thank you, and congratulations on your well-deserved win!
This is a beautiful poem. If only more of us could find the time to rest during busy days, and thank our Lord for all the goodness he provided in our lives, because he didn't have to. Keep up the great words. I too pray over my writing, to the Holy Spirit.