The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting read! Took me awhile to catch on who the "he" was in the story. I have a hard time believing the band-aid had any stickiness left after such a journey! Notice the wrong use of to/too in the sentence about the child he was stuck to. Creative take on the topic!
08/10/13
Oh my goodness...this was really deep and jolting.

Excellent job! God bless~
08/15/13
WOW! This was amazing! Never thought I could have such sympathy for a band-aidand I thought that was amazing enough. But then to have it go on and reflect the homeless soldiers journeyjust Wow again! And what a powerful punch of a message it ends with! So clever and masterfully written! I hope this is a winnerit is certainly one of my favorite reads on this topic!! Terrific job!