The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderfully woven word images - absorbing read great job!
I love that line, "pouring courage into her empty cup." This is a great tale, well told but not overdone. It's great the way you tied this all together.
Good job. I was engaged throughout. The images were clear and compelling and you were right on topic.
I have not been on the site lately, but I had a few minutes to spare and decided to read a few entries. Your title drew me in and I was not disappointed. These few minutes were well spent!

I loved this line...

"When the young woman gets up to leave, she seems to be in possession of something she didnt have when she came in."
Congratulations! It's always great to read what winners write. :-)
I am not able to write for the challenges at this time, but once in a while I drop in to read them. You did an excellent job with this entry. Well done and congrat!
Sydney, I'm going to feature this awesome story on the Front Page Showcase for the week of April 30. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulations!