The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow. Henry, your poems always leave me mulling. The pictures you paint are stellar as always. Your last section is incredible. Thank you for sharing your gift.
Henry, Your gift shines in this poem!
Henry, as a newbie to FWs you are an inspiration! I don't always 'get' the full meaning of your poetry immediately (hehe), hence I am lead to read and re-read until I do, waiting for the amazing revelation I know will eventuate. You are unique, and I believe your writing will no doubt be a beacon for Christ in areas that are so often left in darkness for lack of knowing how to reach them.
You captured the angst of the narrator perfectly. Enjoyed reading/reflecting on this greatly.

Your poem is full of passion and heart. It gave me goosebumps just reading it.

I am also new to FW. I can only hope to someday be half as good as you are.

I really liked the line:

I left tommorrow swallowed in yesterday.
Congratulations for placing 12 in Masters