The Official Writing Challenge
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This brought tears to my eyes. So creative to use the blanket. And then the foot washing, a wonderful way to touch the heart. I liked the daily journaling aspect of this piece--it made me feel I was right there experiencing it with the writer. And it gave me a sort of deja vu feeling. Good writing & it fit the topic perfectly.
Lovely. You got the emotions just right, and I love the breakthrough of course. Nice.