The Official Writing Challenge
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You did an amazing job of capturing the atmosphere in this piece. I was right there. Captivating!
I felt like I was in the audience watching this play unfold. Much was said without actually writing the words. Great job.
Good descriptive writing, but it made me slightly teary eyed.
Excellent, and so sad. Congratulations on your very well deserved placing.
Powerful descriptions. Congratulations on your placing!
Very well done, Loren. You are such a smooth and well trained writer. You lead our emotions around like an experienced horse trainer. Glad to see your EC.
Loren, you just keep getting better and better. This is a magnificent story. Congratulations on placing way up hight! I'm proud of you.