The Official Writing Challenge
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What lovely descriptions! I can see clearly the landscape you have painted with your words. I love the POV, sad as it is/was. And your ending was perfect. Just perfect! Beautifully written!
Your story has a "fairy tale" feel, and I thought your characters might be mythical creatures. I love how you slowly wove the tale, and I only wish you'd have had more words to tell the history. A very enjoyable read.
Definitely an ethereal feel to the story. I had a little trouble connecting to the characters because I wanted to figure out more of the story. Excellent descriptions.