The Official Writing Challenge
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What a great, well-written story! I hope it's a true one--that would make it even better.
Neat! I think we knew from the beginning what would happen, but we didn't know how. Well done.
I so enjoyed this entry! I knew what was coming and you put it all together with such finesse that you had me from the start! Very good job!
It would be very interesting to know all about the journey of the Robin. A beautiful, well-constructed story of one of those coincidences that actually do happen sometimes... at least, "Once in a Blue Moon"! Well done.
Your manner of storytelling was as captivating as the story itself - there was an even flow, a well-orchestrated expressiveness that kept me rolling along.

This vaguely reminded me of painting my initials on the back of turtles with fingernail polish when I was a kid at the lake, and finding them the next summer with "my mark" - lol.
A very intersting story. It was fun waiting to see where the dollar bill showed up. I enjoyed this very much.
I enjoyed this story. Yes, we knew that the dollar would come back into play, but you distracted us with a compelling enough story to make us forget, or at least put it in the back of our mind. Well done.
I enjoyed the journey of the robin in this very creative story.
Loved this! I love the "surprises" of life. Well done!