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Wow. This was heavy. Perfect title, btw. You did a fantastic job of portraying the grief that fades to an itch under the skin...great imagery.
Wow! You about took us to Hell and back again in 750 words. I am so glad they found their way back. Well done for some very powerful writing.
Oh, so sad! I could feel the sufferings of your mc in this story. I'm glad for the hope they were able to find, and yes, it can only from the Lord. I can't even begin to imagine going through this type of suffering without Him. Without actually saying it, you brought out a good point. God is in so hurry for things to be "fixed" and get better. It was a slow process that they had to go through but He did help them find their way. Thanks for sharing.
Whoops! "God is in so hurry.." should have been "God is in no hurry..."
Sad, yet you ended on such a happy note. Yes, with God we can be restored to live our lives fully--with His help. I felt the pain of your MC and your picture words brought each character to life for me. That's great writing!