The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the message and the imagery you used throughout this poem, expecially in the final stanza. Wonderful job!
Gorgeous imagery in a totally masterful poem. Love it to pieces!
I can so hear this set to music - did you have song lyrics in mind when penning these words? Emotion stirring praise.
There is so much I love about this, but I'll hold it to this one word. . . Beautiful. :)
This is an excellent, moving, touching, and beautiful poem. It is filled with wonderful imagery and imaginative metaphors. Love it.
What a wordsmith you are. This is lovely, and the message is great.
The talent and gift you've been given are jumping off the page in this poem. The line that grabbed me was "Christmas is eternity". A winner for sure.
Wow. So much to take in and reflect upon. Well done.
Very well written ...especially loved the ending!