The Official Writing Challenge
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This is hysterical. I love it. The dialogue keeps a great pace, it's all sharp and flat out funny. How often we forget God is funny and loves to laugh too. I laughed out loud on this one. Excellent.
Very creative! Cheri
Very imaginative with some funny one liners. Good dialogue which manages to create both character and a sense of place. Enjoyed it immensely. yeggy

This is a good touch on Moses' calling. I believe that Moses saw God much later in the story though. But that's minor. Interesting read.
This was such an enjoyable, tongue-in-cheek read. Congratulations on your win and showing Christian readers your great sense of humor!