The Official Writing Challenge
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08/24/06
Wow! Awesome! A delight for the eyes and senses. Well done!
Yes, "waiting for the return of the song." What a beautiful, blessed thought! Well done!
08/25/06
"...angel of light spiralled
in breathtaking freefall
to find a foothold in the heart of
man..."


Wonderful image! Beautiful poem, free verse at its best.
08/25/06
I love how the word numinous rolls off the tongue! This is my favorite free verse poem to date. I'm at a loss for words! A perspective that no one but you would think of. Bless you!
08/26/06
How subtley you worked the topic in:

IT
IS
FINISHED

Absolutely marvelous!! I'm going out to look at the stars now!
08/27/06
So, SO powerful! Every line is just perfect - some of your images were simply astounding. Amazing!
Whew! A gripper! Liked your opening and ending lines. :-)
08/31/06
You know I love your poetry. Just thought I'd tell you again! :) Karen
09/06/06
Thank you for this gift!