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Topic: Life (06/15/06)
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By George Parler
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Where’s that scared little boy we know? Ah, there you are. Don’t be afraid; you know I won’t hurt you. Come out into the light where I can see you better. I haven’t seen you in a long time, although I still feel you around sometimes. Yes, I know you’ve been hanging around in the shadows. I’ve kept folks away from you; I know how shy you are. I remember you being so quiet that you couldn’t lead a silent prayer. Don’t worry though; I do the talking now. I’ve gotten pretty good at it, too. Most folks never know you’re there, but I do. How could I forget you; we’ve been through so much together. Shhh …. Don’t cry. Those bad days are over, for good. I promise. For someone to get to you they would have to go through our God and me first. So don’t you worry; He knows our name.
Oh, look … there’s that young groom. You were nervous about that wedding day, huh? But aren’t you glad you didn’t let those cold feet rob you of the best thing to happen in your life, except for God, of course. There’s not a day goes by that I don’t thank the Lord that you stuck it out. Where would we be without her? I don’t even want to think about that.
Well, look who just showed up! Hi, Mr. Dad. Holding your daughter for the first time changed everything, didn’t it? A life out of love. My heart races just remembering looking down into that little face. Yes, I remember you trying to keep the nurses from seeing the tears in your eyes. You weren’t as macho as you thought, were you? The entire world changed when you became a dad. Remember how you struggled turning loose of that wild, self-centered musician, but I am so glad you did.
Who’s that longhaired bearded fellow on the back pew? Look at him; he’s bawling like a baby with a death grip on that pew. Yeah, you just thought you were going to leave the same way you came. Even though the alter call had closed, you learned how the power of a song in Christ can penetrate a heart of stone. Turned your world upside down; didn’t He? But, oh, how much lighter and complete you felt that day. Even though you learned to walk by faith and not by sight or feelings, didn’t it feel wonderful? I get goose bumps just remembering that day.
Is that wedding bells? Yeah, look at you in your suit walking your baby girl down the isle. Didn’t seem like she should’ve been old enough for that yet, but working away from home so much allowed her to grow up fast. And there you were with tears again. The Lord sure turned you into big crybaby, didn’t He? There’s nothing to be ashamed about, trust me. These eyes stay lubricated and for all the right reasons. But you did have regrets, didn’t you? Missing so many of the important things with your family, telling yourself you were trying to make a better life for them. Did you? Would things have been better being home more and bringing home less? I guess we’ll never know now.
Well guys I’m going to have to finish getting dressed. Going to visit the grandkids. They need to see their Paw-paw … the truth of the matter is their Paw-paw needs to see them. Of course they know that they have me wrapped around their finger, but I don’t mind. I’m doing my best to teach them the things we’ve learned together. What curves to avoid in life, which roads are the hardest and most importantly which one is the straight and narrow.
I can’t wait to see what God has in store for the rest of my life on earth, so step up to the line boys, and I’ll race you to the end.
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One minor spelling glitch: "aisle" instead of "isle" (unless she's getting married on a tiny island).
This is clever, unique, and very creative.
(some missing commas in the last two paragraphs... "Well, guys,..." and "...the line, boys." Just a minor oversight; you have direct address nailed in the other places.)
I really enjoyed this... really got a sense of a life well lived.
Blessings!
Trina<><