The Official Writing Challenge
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07/29/26
You picked a good Bible story that went well with the theme. I liked how you put the familiar Bible story into a more modern setting. One suggestion white space makes a story more inviting to the reader and less intimidating. Be sure to leave a space in between paragraphs to make your story more inviting. Keep writing. Good job. Keep writing.:)