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10/19/25
A good message.
10/20/25
It is difficult to hear of all the persecution and killing of Christians in Nigeria. You did a good job of introducing a family who escaped.

The conjunction, yet, doesn't work in this sentence: The armed groups were full of hate, and yet they [delete words yet they] believed that killing Christians was a good thing.

Please also consider revising your last sentence: When Joshua and his sisters were all grown up and had families, their parents were older and retired, they maintained a strong love for each other and cleaved to their faith in God.
Throughout the years ...