The Official Writing Challenge
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02/21/25
Very graphic depiction of evil let loose, but I feel you have overused the bold italics. I'M SO GLAD YOU AVOIDED ADDING CAPITALS TO THE MIX!!!
But seriously, your message is clear and well expressed - apart from what caused my grief. Please note, I'm speaking as a friend - not as a frenemy...
Your breathtaking account kept me hooked from start to finish (the bolding was excessive, though)!