The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! Mercy comes in different packages!
would love to know if this is fiction or non-fiction.
Blessings
08/01/24
God had a plan for Williams' life. Sixteen, no - seventeen miracles, including this young man's life. Great writing.
08/02/24
This is a great example of God’s love and mercy. If it’s a true story then it was miraculous. I felt there was a lot of tell and would have liked a bit more show, nevertheless I enjoyed the read and loved the happy ending.
08/02/24
Interesting story…. and I was interested to hear how it ended up. Would loved to hear more about the ending but appreciate you are on a strict word count. Blessings