The Official Writing Challenge
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03/04/24
This story showed the kindness and compassion of a stranger.

I think you might consider changing your story to just include the story about Martin and leave out the commentary about the Good Samaritan in the beginning.

The story about Martin and how he helped that homeless person with a coat was very intriguing.
03/07/24
Congratulations on your third place finish.


Keep on writing these heartwarming stories.