The Official Writing Challenge
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Good story. Good relation to scriptural quote. But the use of "peace" seemed to be tacked on at the end. Keep writing.
02/27/23
This devotional would be enhanced by concluding with a wrap-up of the introductory story.
Good opener to grab attention and to use as a very clear analogy. My only suggestion would be as above, find a way to wrap back to that opening in the conclusion. Well done.