The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/23
I love this and it made me laugh out loud! I hope it places!
Good imagery. The connection between mourning and morning was a little thin, but I enjoyed the rhythm, rhyme, and subject.
Instead of saying, "Left all of my", see if you like "It left all my cupboards".
Pretty good poem. Keep writing.
02/16/23
I enjoyed this piece.
Well done,
God BLess~