The Official Writing Challenge
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Very creative beginning.































I love it. We all need to be reminded of the truth you write about. Sort of like the way you can't put new wine in an old wine skin. So many will be encouraged as they read this, just as I am encouraged. Thank you!
06/22/22
A different, and positive, approach to the "end."

The poetry format at the beginning would not be my choice for a beginning - but I am a new writer. It did get my attention.

Thanks for the good thoughts and ideas.
06/22/22
An interesting and positive approach to the "end." It provoked thought.

Although I would not have used the poetry format at the beginning, it did get my attention. It was effective to "draw me in."
06/22/22
An unusual, and positive, approach to the "end." It made me think.

Although I would not have used the poetry format at the beginning, it did get my attention - so it was effective.

Thank you.