The Official Writing Challenge
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Great collect of memories, placed in word pictures. Encouraging too. Thank you.
If I could get my own use of the tenses right (the past and the present mainly) I might be tempted to say there may be a difference in the first paragraph with the use of 'was sitting' and then later your use of 'is'. But I don't get it right myself- so it is just a thought.
Anyway I enjoyed your take on remembering.