The Official Writing Challenge
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11/12/21
You have some good ideas here, and they're well expressed. But you've used only about a third of what the word limit allows. This means that we haven't been able to enjoy seeeing where those ideas could take us.
Encouraging article- which is a kindness.
I see where you haven't used your word count but I sometimes wonder if there is the occasional topic where an author has found no spark of inspiration other than sitting with the reader and commenting, ‘we are children of the King- isn’t it obvious?’.
If that's a point - kudos to your participation and for thinking it over with your fellow writers 🖐️

It is so good when God gives us this gift of a changed perspective! Thanks for reminding us that He will do this. I would have enjoyed more examples of how this works for you.
11/16/21


Thank you for sharing your good views on a great topic but you were economical with words, leaving a reader longing to hear more from you.