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I like what you have written. I think if the first paragraph was deleted, the next paragraph will capture reader interest. The story conveys everything eliminated in the first paragraph. Well done.
A very interesting read with a great message.
03/05/21
I think that sometimes missionaries do change culture owing to a lack of cross-cultural understanding. For example, westerners might impose European style clothing on the assumption that this is somehow more godly. If you read biographies of Hudson Taylor, it is fascinating how he adopted Chinese clothing (to the affront of his fellow missionaries) and in so doing won many souls for Christ.

Nevertheless there are very real issues here. When we worked in Africa, we were aware of customs similar to the Levirite marriage whereby if a man died of HIV, his brothers would take in the wife and attempt to 'purify' her through them all sleeping with her. Such practices only increased the infection rate. So well done for illustrating a very real issue.
03/07/21
Thank you for this informative article; being a rape and rape attempted survivor myself, my heart goes out to the women to whom this and similar untruth cultural practices has happened to. The Truth of Jesus's Love has set us free!