The Official Writing Challenge
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12/12/20
Interesting story!
12/30/20
This story has amazing potential. Try writing will active verbs and keep passive to a minimum. Instead of telling the reader of the MC's find, put the reader there. Describe the scene, the smells, how his heart pounded when he spotted the old masterpiece. Describe his joy, how he rushed home and showed it to his wife. Cause the reader to smell the paint! Have him dialog with his wife about God's masterpiece, creation, as they work. Keep scribbling!