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Indeed, he will never leave us not forsake us. Your have been through so much yet you keep the faith. Thanks for sharing. Well done~~
Indeed, he will never leave us not forsake us. Your have been through so much yet you keep the faith. Thanks for sharing. Well done~~
10/30/20
I would suggest a space between paragraphs to make for easier reading. You have been through a lot and this article strikes me as a diary with an application at the end. Hope things go better for you this year.
Very effective reflection of emerging from uncertainty, painful decisions and things hard to accept. There is hope in what you wrote. Well done.
11/01/20
WOW! You have had one tragedy after another. I'm glad that you have God to hold on to. He will carry you through.
11/20/20
this article has the meat to become truly inspiring as so many obstacles were overcome. Start with a stronger hook. Rather than simply relate every detail, pull the reader in with emotion. Show how your dear husband struggled to breathe. Show how you ran to Jesus over and over again for the comfort you needed. There is no need to put giants into quotes and mention them repeatedly. Open your hook with the concept of giants and close with the actual wording. So, pull the reader in with a strong hook, keep the reader engaged with strong showing of emotion and finally, give a satisfying conclusion of God's unending faithfulness and the joy of trusting him - even in harsh and difficult circumstances! Blessings on your continued journey into the goodness of God!