The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/15
So sad you or your MC ended up with no photographs of the honeymoon. I've heard of that happening at a wedding, too.

Red Ink: Watch out for run-on sentences and comma splices. Example: Sentence number one. It needed a semicolon before the last sentence.

07/27/15
I am so sorry that your honeymoon pictures did not turn out. However, you still have each other and the memories you shared together.