The Official Writing Challenge
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01/29/15
I loved this entire piece. Powerful message and excellent writing.

God bless~
02/01/15
Wow. Very impacting and well written. I was absorbed all the way through with the economic articulate word choices that fitted so much in.
02/01/15
Great writing here! Love the inner dialogue - very believable. However, how sad the young pastor caved into the demands of "old money".
Good conversation and discussion.

At least the author did not finish the story so each reader can finish it for himself.

So each reader can finish it for himself. Here is mine in a short version: Sunday morning the preacher stood by the pulpit but then bowed on his knees confessing his sin of greed. He asked for the prayers of the congregation. After several members had prayed for him, he stood and started his sermon saying: "In demonstration of my repentance, I am putting my job on the line. The title of today's sermon is,"The power of God's Word in Searching Sin in the Heart."
02/04/15
Wow! great job! I really enjoyed this piece. Well written, and terrifying. That ending!!