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11/29/14
This is a scary scenario that I presume is based on fact for a lot of unfortunate young people. Your main character told the story well.
12/03/14
Eerie! Too often, young people are led away from reason with sudden fame. Well written - I can see that this is only a fraction of a longer story in your mind.
12/03/14
An amazingly accurate story for so many young people in this world today. Well written and expressed.

God bless~
Oh wow! I was not expecting those sharp twists!

I am certain that such tales are very sadly close to reality.

Well done!