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07/19/14
I like the hope you offer in your last stanza. Thanks for sharing.
07/20/14
I enjoyed your article. Thanks for sharing.
07/21/14
This flowed well and delivered an excellent message on the unwavering love of God.

I really liked both your pace and your use of language in this piece. Thanks for sharing it with us.
07/22/14
Powerful!
Loved the last part, it said it all.

God bless~
07/22/14
I really liked the power of these words 'deformed by this world'.

When we conform to this world we become deformed from the reality of the world we should be living in. A great play on the words of Romans 12:1-2.

Blessings.
07/23/14
Transformed and conformed-you said it well.