The Official Writing Challenge
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Very well thought out and provoking poem, taking the reader on an eye opening journey.
10/26/09
Lots of beautiful images in here!

Is there an extra word (to) in the third line?

I love the line about the sable shawl...very nice.
10/27/09
great work of creating clear images. lots of good ones.