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05/22/08
Oh, you made me cry! Love it that you left a message of hope at the end, tho. Well done.
05/23/08
A very different take on family pet - but gives the reader something to think about...and it was an enjoyable read with a dramatic ending. Nicely done.
05/23/08
A good story that's very true to life. We often have to live with dreams unfulfilled. I like the God connection. Good job.
05/24/08
That was really depressing. I had such great hopes for Robert and is dog. The ending disappointed me. I know such things happen all the time but I didn't want it to happen here. Saying the dog is finally free just didn't satisfy me. Good writing. Sad story.
A good story of truth, of life and the message of our freedom to come no matter what happens as we live on earth.
~Ree~
You did an excellent job with your really sad story.
05/28/08
Sad story that was beautifully written. How heartbreaking that must have been for Robert and the family. While I'd hoped for a different ending, sadly this is reflective of the reality of life all too often. Well done. Blessings!~ Tracy
I felt for Robert on so many levels throughout this piece. Your emotions are reigned in but real, they can be under the surface and still give a charge. Thumbs up!
Oh my! So sad! This is heart-breaking. I was with Daisy and Robert, wanting to be free too. You captured the feeling of it so well. Great job! ^_^
Your warning when you threw your brick still didn't prepare me for the tears that flowed when I read this. It was just beautiful. I felt so sorry for Robert and for Daisy. So well written (and from the heart). Well done, well done.
05/29/08
Very well written and very true to life. A real heart breaker!
05/29/08
Wow, that's just sad. My dad has the heart of a farmer...so he has planted several gardens this year...the back yard is growing all kinds of tomatos, squash, etc.