The Official Writing Challenge
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That was fun!
Very unique backdrop for the dialog. Great job. Very creative.
Well, I won't look at shooting stars the same after reading this!

My favorite thing about your writing has always been your way with dialog, and as always, this story's rich with great dialog.
Excellent. Great dialogue and plot.
Creativity at it's finest! Great dialogue! Great job!
Well, I for one am glad I 'found' this one! ;)

I absolutely loved (and enjoyed) reading this whole scenario of dialogue and 'atmosphere.' :)

It intertained me, connected with me, and engaged me in the hope for the outcome.

Great prequel! I want to see the movie!
A good read. I'd like to know more... what is going to happen? What's made the captain so cynical?...Guess I'll have to wait for the novel to come out!
What a fun read! This isn't the story I was looking for, but I'm really glad I stumbled upon it. Great job!
This was a delightful story, I felt as if I was aboard ship as one of the silent hands watching everything take place.