The Official Writing Challenge
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I wanted to know more about who Wil was and what the relationship was between them. I think it would have helped to know his age, too. But the imagery was awesome. And it punctuated the story in just the right places. Kate~
Ah, the 'Costal experience. Always full of splattered joy, always worth writing about. Nice job.
Good story, good descriptions, but it left me wanting more! I guess that is what you want- someone to buy the book!
Well written. I felt like I came into the middle of a good story and need to know the background. You have interesting characters and a great set up for more.
This is masterful writing! Are you writing a book? You are very readable.